Essay revision | Article writing homework help

I need to do a portfolio for my WRIT 106 class and the professor is asking for a complete revision of this essay. Please do a good job on this as I will be graded for how good the revision was. Use more quotes from both of the stories “The Lesson” and make my Central Claim Stronger. I have also attached the comments of my professor. Thank you

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